"Anonymous. If we split the three beats into six. I think you will agree that inbetween 1 2 there is a gap that gap is called (and ) The (and) belongs to the beat we are leaving and not the beat which hasn't arrived yet. Think about the two ( and ) where are you at the end of the ( and ), and what is left. Anybody can work that out for themselves. Just make sure you are not at your highest on two."
That is your personal opinion, for which you will find no support in the book. It might well be right - but there is nothing written to support it.
You still have not paid attention to the fact that "Continue to rise on 2 and 3" refers specifically to STEP two and STEP three, and NOT BEAT two or BEAT three.
Because you have further defined the second half of beat 2 to include the closing of the feet, and because the book has that occuring only within the period of step 3, it is quite clear that your beats DO NOT MATCH the book's steps.
As a result of this, you can't use the book as source of authority to argue that someone else's rise is wrong.
You can only use your artistic judgement.